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Phase III: Final Proposal (full intro, method, references with revisions)
Your final proposal will be a full document that includes a title page, revised introduction, revised method, and revised references section. This should incorporate all feedback you have received, any new/relevant reading/content that you have learned in the course, and any new information that you deem necessary to include. Yes, I will be checking that relevant course content components have been added – at this stage you will have learned all course content. You must turn in both a clean and track changes version. Abstract is required at this Phase.
This paper will be evaluated on the following components:
Introduction Section: An introduction section is included that substantially sets up for the research questions proposed. Arguments and positions on the topic are clearly thought out, logically flowing, and maintains an appropriate balance of description versus conciseness. The positions and thoughts are also well-supported by appropriate and relevant past research. (15pts)
Method Section: The paper demonstrates a more than adequately thought-out potential research design. This includes a clear study procedure surrounding recruitment and data collection, detailed summary of potential measures that will aid in assessing the research question, and a target population/sample of participants. The method section appears ready with minor or little/no feedback to move on to the next steps in the research processes. (15pts)
APA Style and Basic Requirements: Paper fully meets APA style requirements in terms of general formatting, page numbers, reference page, abstract, section headers, citations, references, font, text size, title page, etc. This is in accordance with the 7th edition of the APA manual. (10pts)
General Revisions and Grammar: The paper has made appropriate revisions based on comments/feedback by the instructor in the prior phase AND on new, relevant material learned in the course. The paper is also written with little to no grammatical errors. (70pts)