I already wrote and turned in a paper for this class. I need to turn in the extra credit in order to raise the grade. Both parts are required for credit.
Part 1: Take a look at the feedback on the midterm paper. In hindsight, does it match what you feel you did? Explain your thinking on why or why not. Use examples. What do you plan to do to maintain what went right and improve what could have been better? I’m looking for at least 2 full paragraphs (minimum 4 sentences each) along with actual specifics in ideas, examples, and explaining.
Part 2: Take a body paragraph of your choice from your midterm, and re-write it to be its best possible self. You will probably need to do a lot more than just fix typos or formatting. I’m asking you for an actual full revision of this paragraph.
I will attach inital feedback as well the original paper, and instructions for that paper.