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I have a first draft (3 pages) of an essay with feedback specifically on the highlighted sentences if tapped on, I will attach it as a pdf below. I will also attach my paper instructions as a photo below. So basically, what is needed is to turn this 3 page first draft into an overall 5 page final draft with the feedback given. Prompt: “What is the function that art plays in Oscar Wilde’s The Picture of Dorian Gray?” (Oscar Wilde’s The Picture of Dorian Gray) BOOK – This is the overall feedback, other than the highlighted specific feedback, which is NOT in the pdf: Focus first on developing your close readings. So far in this draft there are none, so you need to locate which claims you want to make and then find quotations or details from the text that you want to use as evidence to develop these ideas further. – I am not yet seeing an original central claim in your introduction, and am seeing snippets of claims in the paragraphs but which are also not yet fully articulated. Start first with your close readings, and then work through what claims you are making.
Thank you,
Good luck.
Category: Classic English Literature
This is a revision on a paper already written. Its just adding or taking away from the essay already written to answer all of the prompts.
Attached you will find the instructions needed. Please fill out essay organization and write a 1 1/2 page paper also. Choose from the choices provided. I have underlined the one I like but if any other one is easier that is fine. Please use simple words and make it simple and easy to read
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Please write a research paper about the document I am about to attach with the research question of: “Envy in Sleeping Beauty in the Wood as a reaction to beauty in the story related to today’s social commentary on beauty standards” I’ll also attach a pdf with four fictional stories, one of the four are sleeping beauty in the woods for reference if needed.
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Write a 1200 to 1500 word analysis of Edward Albee’s play Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf focusing on some aspect(s) of the play that appeals to your interest. Your essay should be an informed analysis with a clearly stated underlined thesis that appears no later than the second paragraph of your essay. You must take special care to make sure that your analysis is not simply a recap of the events or plot. You may focus on one of the characters and critique the play from the character’s perspective, or write a critique from your own perspective using the strategy of Reader-Response criticism.
Before attempting to write the paper, read the pages i provided very carefully, You must follow the steps described therein to develop your analysis of the play.
Your essay must be persuasive and must convince your reader of your insight into the play. Your underlined thesis, as instructed above, must be stated assertively in the first or second paragraph of your essay, and the remainder of your essay should support your thesis convincingly.
To avoid plagiarism, please document all sources and source materials mentioned in your essay per MLA guidelines. Follow formatting instructions as provided for previous essay assignments.
-Select passages from the book persuasion and wrtie responses
-Structure: up to 500 words on five passages from the novel in which you describe and discuss the ways in which Jane Austen has made a Rovultionary Woman.
-Overall theme: Specifically her involvement in the revolution, dsicussed in the book and other credible sources, as well as what made her a revolutionary woman.
-e.g 5 ways fanning prices national park in which anne helliot the heroine
-Chicago Manuel
-In text citation
-Works consulted
Identify and research an individual who is successful (one who has achieved mastery, not just fleeting fame) in a particular field. In your discussion of this successful person you will decide which principles Gladwell talks about impacted that outlier’s success:
1a. The Matthew Effect–hidden advantages/extraordinary opportunities (Chapter 1)
1b. The Matthew Effect–accumulated advantages (Chapter 1)
2. 10,000 hours of meaningful work in order to become a master/expert in one’s field (Chapter 2)
3. Advantageous era of birth–right age at the right time (Chapter 2 and 5)
4. The ability to express to someone what one wants & being heard – “practical intelligence” (Chapter 4 P. 101-108)
5. Born in a demographic trough- not a lot of people so more opportunities for success (Chapter 5)
6. Exposure to meaningful work- autonomy, complexity, and effort/reward (Chapter 5)
7. Cultural practices which encouraged success- support from family/mentors encourage success (Chapters 6-9)
Your thesis should be a statement that clearly develops which of Gladwell’s principles apply to this person. There will be more than one category that applies. MLA documentation should be used for all researched sources. A potential paper will look like this: I. Intro: Using some sort of introductory element [fact, statistic, question(s), anecdote, etc.] introduce your successful person. In the thesis, state which of Gladwell’s principles for success apply to your outlier.
II. Body paragraphs. Support your position using at least THREE different principles from the other side of this paper – TATE / ATE your paragraphs in the following way: T- Identify and define Gladwell’s principle you are applying to your Outlier. A- Tie Gladwell’s principle to your outlier in a clear and specific way. T- Use TEXT EVIDENCE from Outliers to provide support for your assertion and definition of the principle. E- Elaborate on how your research proves Gladwell’s principle for your outlier A- Make a claim about how your Outlier demonstrates this Gladwell principle in a clear and specific way. T- Use OUTSIDE RESEARCH TEXTUAL SUPPORT to provide support for your assertion. E- Elaborate on how your research proves Gladwell’s principle applies to your outlier.
III. Conclusion. Wrap up your paper by restating your thesis and reviewing your paper’s purpose. End with a “clincher” statement that drives your point home about how your Outlier achieved success due to these principles.
IV. Works Cited. Use the Purdue OWL website or other online source to create an MLA Format Works Cited Page. Citation for book: Gladwell, Malcolm. Outliers: The Story of Success. Back Bay Books/Little, Brown, 2009.
Multimedia Presentation Requirements: Your presentation will cover the content of your paper including the way he/she has achieved success in his/her field (utilizing Gladwell’s principles for success), and a conclusion that includes how either society or yourself could improve going forward to achieve success.
In a 3-5 page double-spaced typed paper (page minimum excludes the reference page), you will review an autobiography written about an experience of mental illness from the perspective of an individual living with a mental disorder or from the perspective of an individual who has a family member who is affected. Below is a list of autobiographies to choose from, but you are not limited to this list. Amazon.com currently has all of these books in stock (both new and used). Major bookstores will also carry many of these books.
Broken Glass: A Family’s Journey through Mental Illness, by Robert Hine
*The Center Cannot Hold: My Journey through Madness, by Elyn Saks
*Crazy: A Father’s Search through America’s Mental Health Madness, by Pete Earley
*Divided Minds: Twin Sisters and Their Journey through Schizophrenia, by Pamela Wagner Carolyn Wagner
*Mad House: Growing Up in the Shadow of Mentally Ill Siblings, by Clea Simon
*Madness: A Bipolar Life, by Marya Hornbacher
*The Quiet Room: A Journey Out of Torment of Madness, by Lori Schiller and Amanda Bennett
*Recovered, Not Cured: A Journey through Schizophrenia, by Richard McLean
*An Unquiet Mind: A Memoir of Moods and Madness, by Kay Redfield Jamison
*Wasted: A Memoir of Anorexia and Bulimia, by Marya Hornbacher
If you have a book you would like to review that does not appear on this list you can let me know so I can approve it in advance.
The review should include:
(1) Brief summary of the book (no more than a page in length),
(2) Descriiption of the major mental disorder being discussed (inclusive of [a] DSM-IV-TR criteria, [b] prevalence of disorder in general population, [c] what population is most at risk of having this disorder, [d] known causes and risk factors based on ecological framework),
(3) Descriiption of what services or advocacy organizations the author used to help treat or cope with the mental illness (if read an autobiography about family member of a person with a mental disorder, then discuss what services they both used),
(4) In your opinion, what could the author or family member have more effectively manage or cope with the mental disorder? Mention at least two evidence-based prevention, treatment, or management interventions from the literature.
I will provided the thesis and the topic sentences you can you any only academic article Write an argumentative research essay based on a clear thesis that presents your response to the research question you’ve selected.
Details checklist
Be sure your essay does all of the following:
Is formatted per the MLA
Is at least 1500 words (not including works cited, title, and student information)
Is supported with academic evidence and includes at least 4 citations
Does not use direct quotes, only synthesis with summary and paraphrase
Does not use personal pronouns
Is free of spelling and grammar errors
Is designed completely without any hint of plagiarism or AI use
Each topic sentence should adds together to equal your thesis
Your thesis is ONE sentence only in the subject + purpose + point of view style
Your purpose is to argue/persuade, and your thesis purpose language clearly communicates this
What does “Complete” mean? It means your draft is the required length, includes an intro, body, and conclusion. It has a one-sentence thesis and topic sentences that support and prove your thesis. Paragraphs are written “hamburger style”, evidenced is cited with in-text citations, and you have a works cited page. One of your topic sentences and paragraphs is a refutation.
Any incident of AI assistance or plagiarism will receive an automatic grade of “0”.
Your assignment is to write a formal boast about yourself. Tell us your deeds, who your parents are, what you plan to do, and how you’re not gonna take nothin’ from nobody. Your accomplishments may be academic, athletic, musical, social, artistic, etc. Lay aside your humility! Remember, you’re applying to colleges and jobs and may need to do a bit of boasting.
Being creative, include your genealogy, your acts of courage, your victories over enemies, and any other achievements and awards. Punctuate your poem. To end your boast, state your next great act. Directions and example attached. Must be written in the style of Beowulf.
Personal Qualities: Smart, leadership, fast driving skills, future welding professional. Parents are both in leadership roles. You can be creative.