Hello ,
Hope all is well! I am going through the presentations and research proposals. While you selected an interesting topic and found relevant literature to support the development of this topic, the project is built as a literature review, not as a research proposal.
Throughout the semester we completed several exercises that aimed to support the development of your proposal. We worked on the introduction framework (DLE5) and developing research questions (DLE6). I am surprised to see that those elements were not included in your presentation.
I noticed that your paper is structured similarly to your presentation. Not including a Methods section takes away a lot of points. If you would like to correct this, I can accept an updated proposal by 12 pm on Monday 5/13.
Teacher sent me this email above letting me know my previous submission was not correct. I will attach the rubric below with in structions and also will attach previous paper with the 10 citations that was used. I will also attach my DLE5 and DLE6 assignments as well that she is talking about in the email. Can anyone plz help asap I need this due by 9:15am!!!!